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Beggars And Kings

In the evening
all the hours that weren't used
are emptied out
and the beggars are waiting to gather them up
to open them
to find the sun in each one
and teach it its beggar's name
and sing to it It is well
through the night

but each of us
has his own kingdom of pains
and has not yet found them all
and is sailing in search of them day and night
infallible undisputed unresting
filled with a dumb use
and its time
like a finger in a world without hands
乞丐与王
       纪红军译
于今夜
没用完的时光
抛弃在尘埃
守着它的乞儿，捡起
急切地一一打开
再逐一寻找黑暗里的阳光
好用来做自己的商标
为之歌唱
为之永夜

我们都拥有
一个共同的王
一一一一痛苦时光
然而，谁又能够际遇
日夜兼程追寻
绝望而难耐
那些时光
追寻后铁定的徒劳，就像
看见一根指头
脱离了自己的手掌
又无可奈何

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